@SuperOniichan: Blame it on having seen way too many people make serious criticisms on such "social justice" topics in the same tone/phrasing that you did. You did not read to me like you're making a joke at all.
@EG0611 @henman: Looking at both the Twitter and Pixiv version of the raws, I notice that not only they're identical, but the text in some places is a lot more than implied by the original group's translation; in fact, they neglected to translate the floating lines in page 4's second and third...
@SuperOniichan: What's wrong with "forced to have sex"? Rape as a legal term usually has a very specific definition that's typically limited to penis-in-vagina or penis-in-anus (thus excluding oral sex, intercrural sex, handjobs, and many other acts often described as "sex" by the average...
So... he has no sex drive whatsoever yet? Or is he simply asexual (which still leaves room for romantic relationships and being possible to sexually arouse through, say, manual stimulation)?
@starburst98: I'm guessing she's an angel in disguise, or else is a member of a "church militant"-type Japanese Christian order whose mission is to hunt down and exorcise demons.
@unime: Arisa does ship them though. She even helped Koyuki with confessing to Masakatsu, to the point of ranting angrily when Koyuki relapsed to self-deprecation after Masakatsu's confession in order to break the poor girl out of her funk.
@mirp448: In some other manga, the bystanders keep tearing their hair off as they mentally/literally scream "JUST GET MARRIED ALREADY!" In some other other manga, they feel sickened by how absurdly lovey-dovey the couple is and regularly tell them to "get a room."
@Airwave2k2: That looks like...
@yuushin: Actually, the first syllable is also different. "Gretal" in Japanese should start with "gu", not "go".
That said... There are some issues with the translation in some spots, but overall it's comprehensible. Do you want my feedback?
I'm so proud of Masakatsu for managing to not lose his composure at having Koyuki be called his girlfriend. He's probably a huge mess on the inside, though.
@WLeung: For all we know, he might end up pulling a heroic sacrifice either defending the FMC or to further her quest to prevent the bad future. Or he falls for the heroine, who is such a good girl that the FMC herself cannot bring herself to stand between them, and thus bitterly stands aside...
@iltrof: Well, I hope you eventually get around to translating those 1-page extras. I bet it would've been far easier for you if they were all collected under a "moment" (weird Twitter term, but it's basically collections of Twitter posts).