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You need to get a proofreader. Ideally, proofread this chapter and upload the edits. I'd volunteer, but I'm already overloaded. Please look for a proofreader; at least edit a recruiting page into your chapters or use Grammarly or something, because the current proofreading level is atrocious.

I miss the "-desu" the other group added, but this is so much better.

Woosh

Friendly fellow.

@xyzzy no problem with the premise itself, but this chapter specifically had such disorienting dialogue it felt like a seesaw. I don't know if it was translation error or something else but after it got re-uploaded it's more readable, though still by far the weakest chapter in the series thus...

Did anyone else have no idea what the fuck was going on in this chapter? I don't know if it was a translation issue or something else but I was getting something akin to nausea or seasickness while reading it, it was so disorienting.

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I don't mind, but why is the gap between uploads so long? Does it only release occasionally? Are you all really busy? Are the raws hard to come by?

Was about to say "him again" but someone beat me to it lol

He lookin' less and less human by the chapter

@justabhi11 it's still broken.

Well that's an unbelievably awful outcome.

They never can leave well enough alone

"And what will glaring at me achieve, huh?" Glares right back

On page 2 it says "Teresan"

Lol.

On page 14, it should be "thrust into a lot of trouble".

It lives! I wanted to join your discord to volunteer as a proofreader, but the link provided doesn't work.

Please slow down your releases to improve the quality. I'm only a proofreader and you don't need one of those, so I can't help you with that unless you want another proofreader, but these two chapters, while not bad, have had many small issues that lower the overall quality and readability of...

She's mad. This will be fun.