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That chapter.. wow, right in the feels. immediately undone by 'shes still alive somewhere'. If you are going to kill off a character and have a big emotional impact... have the balls to stick to it. keeping the other girl around as a fake has a big impact all on its own as well.

Who knew that these 'missing chapters' would fill in so much missing information! In a few more chapters ill almost need to go back and reread the last 6 chapters.

There is so much wrong with this story, and while its great that someone did something to the mayor, nobody has told her anything about the stuff the mayor has done, her doing this because he tried to encourage them to go with him is absurd. I dont get why they are all perfectly ok with the...

They need to kill the mayor. His skill is useless and he got people killed because he wanted to be a big shot. "oh man, how did i run out of map time, it lasts for 30 minutes and i didnt even attempt to keep track of it" hmm "do we take the straight easy path, or do we go double the distance...

Ah yes, they were in the same class 3 times over 7 years, so that means they are "close". Why did they risk dying just to get him out of the vent? how did they even get him down?

Why is his leg bent the wrong way and stuck in the vent? How would that even happen? did a human break his leg and stuff him in there? did he break his own leg and then stuff it in there?

@KitsuneAoi dont worry about it, stuff happens~ I know you guys always put in a lot of effort to get things correct. its just that it seems like most groups wont listen, consider or fix mistakes so we all wanted to voice our opinion on it so that hopefully it wouldnt be ignored and would be...

@bvdaf It really is dumb, the MC knew he would die but decided to die to save an old man? apparently his sister and his own life dont matter. Then since the MC and the old man knew the future, even blocking the door the answer was simple. MC runs through first, blocks the door the same as he...

@bvdaf because the authors story is one giant derp. "if i die, i need you to take care of my sister, if she dies, everyone dies" "can you explain that" "Sure after i risk my life doing the one thing that lead me to ask you to look out for her" Also, Why would the MC think that his sister...

@Aichan if thats the case, this would be great. i just hope its nothing shady. he has too many difficulties so early on, businesses shouldnt feel threated by a stall that sells giba meat that nobody wants to eat. unless they love the small and want to hire him, but with the 'giba stench' those...

Thanks for picking up this series, its better then i expected once you read more of it. though regarding the note at the end of the chapter... i cant say i agree. noire means black, and that character has black hair, the other ones name means white and is white colored. i think its fairly clear...

So she would be the same as her uncle if she took back her money and power. Does the author SERIOUSLY thinking taking back what was stolen from you is the same as stealing? That is the dumbest thing i have read in a vary long time. Not to mention the guy is a murderer... how would she be in any...

hes not 'the strongest level 1' his level is so high it doesnt register so he is at minimum above the previous ever highest level. even his first registered level at level 1 isnt accurate because his registered level is 'max' or 'highest ever'. This is just poor writing by the author.

@hahaxd i fully expected him to tell her she did a great job and that 'she can rest easy now' and that he would see her back at the entrance, then youd get a 'what' confused look from her and then he would karate chop her neck and kill her. I suspect this next training will be insane as she...

@Qelix totally agree. vary poor writing by the author. Times like this i really wish the TL would change the dialog to make up for the authors lack of skill. im not sure how anyone can make such a simple mistake in the first chapter, its honestly a really bad sign for future chapters.

@Akabane Its something Italian or Spanish people call a fellow countryman or friend.

@Werebearguy totally agree. though maybe that is part of the 'stern tough ruler' image the other girl set up for her... i suppose it is more domineering then sitting there without her legs crossed or sitting there in pants... or a longer dress. *shrug*

@ChickenScratch Even if people hate their govt for what they did, abuses happen in every war, more so in the past then in modern times. In this case the author should be targeting the japanese govt or the officials responsible. but writing it so their civilians die while the MC sits around is...

@FrogheadFlan With an attitude like that, i dont think even a mother could love you.

For all that guys "intelligence" and research, he didnt actually look to see where the money came from? That is massively stupid.