At first i thought the comments were exaggerating the grammar of Haeven Scan's work being bad (i found and understood the story alright), but after reading them all just gotta say @belittled_mia 's translations are super refined and amazing quality. They probably arent as close to the literal...
This really feels like its the cliffnotes edition of an already mediocre story. Nothing makes real sense and it doesnt stick to a "trope" or even a set of tropes and run with them, instead constantly introducing new ideas (ideas stolen from much better manwha) yet never sticking to them.
2/10...
I'll bet actual money that, just like this release, LH have stockpiled quite a few "new chapters" for half-dead manga releases, waiting for good hearted translators to pick it up just so they can re-snipe an assert dominance. And then? Maybe 1-2 more chapters before they drop it from the main...
This has now been fully released on Webtoon (gotta use the Free Daily Pass system though). Thank you, Hour of Lunacy, for bring us the series up to this point! We owe you one, Pigpen is the GOAT.