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Starts off nice, but begins to become convoluted 7 chapters in. The art is still pretty though.

the dude with makeup seems a bit like a mary sue

ok this makes no damn sense

are you fucking serious. that's how the twins get caught!? the mc just randomly takes a nap and they go outside to get kidnapped...

so is the author going to explain who that skellington was

Starts off somewhat passable in the 1st chapter. But it feels as if the author is purposefully making all his characters either boring or unlikeable. You're supposed to hook your readers right from the very beginning, but that's really hard to do without an interesting plot or likeable...

lol wtf, i wasn't expecting that

the japanese axe is a vicious weapon 💀

How could humans conquer a whole country of dragons. We see in earlier chapters that they're weak as shit. And if dragons 500 years in the past were so weak as to lose to humans, why did they think they stood a chance at fighting against the gods. And of course most of this happens through...

shieeeeeeeeet

@Asvi guess you're right about that. maybe it was better paced and explained in the original novel.

I hate how these stories with ancient MC's ALWAYS treat them like they're still young. Authors only use their age to make them OP. It's so dumb how they not only look young, but they act no different from anyone else who looks their age.

The author should have foreshadowed those facts long before Chapi's death. You can't just create a "setup(monsters being made of mana)" AT THE SAME TIME of the "payoff(reviving monsters with more mana)" otherwise it feels way too convenient.

wow, no one got screwed over in this chapter

@DonGiovanni I remember feeling the same way when i was reading this part of the web novel. The author's anti japan dick stroking kinda started affecting the quality of his work. But then again it was inevitable that this story would start showing cracks. I can't imagine how difficult it would...

i hope the writer expands on the lore and explains who created the maze and why it keeps reincarnating people

i like how even in their imagination, Tanya looks angry while visiting church

even the villain had to give kagenoh props

anyone else kinda feel sorry for the dragon? he was just kinda minding his own business

What the hell is up with these isekai and structural problems. WHERES THE FUCKING PLOT. WHERES THE CHARACTER MOTIVATIONS. Even slice of life is not exempt from these narrative concepts, FUCK AGHGGHHGHHHH!!!