@Solipsist
The panel with a clock flipping suggests that some time passed without him doing anything and she decided to just fall asleep. Not to mention the position change.
The romance is a bit meh even without the incest part, with it it'll be better to just do away with it altogether. The politics, while not a masterpiece, still has a hook to it. Let's see where it'll go.
Huh, really? People really say the art is good?
The action is awkward and sometimes the proportion is wacky. If this were a less action-focused story then I guess it can be said to be unique, but it isn't..
@sdarkpaladin
The problem with this author isn't in the story, but that they frequently drop a series they're working on to start another one. This one is still on the hook.
"This [Gamemaster] job cannot be selected by players. If you are able to pick it, it's a bug, so please don't choose it."
Bwahahahaha! Even the GM is not safe from the bugs