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I'd have rather have the father just straight up emotionally abuse MC because at least it would be understandable. I'm just... I'm frustrated by the dad who's unable to speak with the daughter he loves. Not to make even worse that there's no reason for this change of heart because that hasn't...

This chapter was like reading a bullet-point draft. I can see where it all connects, but it never actually gets there.

So I guess the MC is going to showcase like a good fraction of his power now? Interesting.

I always hope for something interesting in school discrimination, but I always end up disappointed. However, I'm always down for a stupid OP MC

Tbh this series could end end here and itd be alright.

A lot of this is great, but its really just window dressing until the villain enters. Build up familial bonds then take 2

I see common sense be lackin with the dragons.

YOU RIGHT, golem is best girl. No contest.

I dont really see the point of his backstory here. Might as well have just made him a weak awakened, then boosted him.

A very... understandable take for a trust issues plot. I wouldn't be surprised that if they never come to love their father. I just kinda hope it speeds up. However, it does seem like the easiest way to integrate Jason into thr story. He's gotta actually be a guardian.

This is why we can't have nice things. Also, I believe Paganini once had a Violin string break on him and he did the same thing, but I feel like there was so much missing.

God bless your souls for doing those pages. Must've been hell.

I'm going to miss Walter's humanity. But, more edge is fine.

Alright, OP and no nonsense MC. Good foundation. Lets see where this goes.

I hope there's backstory too. There's no way this guy shouldnt be dead or at least maimed.

.....what the fuck is that 2nd chapter.

Im about little sister arc. GOIN BACK

Yikes

If he just doesnt use intimidate again that'll be justdepressing

It was at this moment the MC actually died. Jk