Thank you for the chapter!
You could try writing down your first reactions to each chapter or your favorite parts to talk about later? Personally, I don't any complaints in the TL notes, so don't worry too much ^^
I think "Etelle" sounds better than "Ethel" in a fantasy setting. I have a feeling he won't be using that name much longer though, so I doubt it matters much either way.
Thank you for the chapter!
...Did she seriously think telling an unstable patient about his families gruesome deaths in detail while making hints that it was his fault FOR BEING IN A *COMA* WAS A GOOD IDEA?!
It looks like she's the type to rile shit up for fun.😧