@TitanAnteus 100% agreed. I was really disappointed to see that the dude in the prologue was not the MC. I find the detective very unlikeable and would've prefer to see this world play out in the eyes of a dude who just wants to live his life.
i get it, you don't want to erase and clean the pages, but it made reading much more unnatural. If you don't want to put in the work then don't post it