I've only got two critiques. Save your random thoughts and comments for the end page or add a cover page stop interrupting the flow of the comic. If several words are getting chopped up in speech and thought bubbles reduce the font size a little.
@Airwave2k2
You might be right about it being a millennial (and zoomer) thing. My wife is one and she sometimes does this to me. Although it's usually something like this: