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@kaezeribato Well, it's still important to talk with your partner to know what your partner thinks. Just to clear things up. But yeah, I prefer going through the dating without the label first.
@Yautja lmao dude. Your audacity to think of yourself as well-spoken and well-thought out is completely laughable. Especially since you completely missed the point and ignored the sample sentence which showed what a tame and neutral response is. Why did you ignore the sample sentence? Did you...
@Yautja lmao dude. "If anyone is being toxic, it's you my guy. If you read what I said in a completely neutral voice, it's pretty damn tame." Are you for real?
"Improved translations are good and all, but really? 8 fucking months later, for a chapter long since past? At least have it accompany...
@MrMcNasty lmao when you don't even read the text that you ignore the "She just tossed them all out!". "She" not "I". His ex tossed them out, not him. He even said "I would've started hating myself even more if I had given up on the hobby that gave me my confidence." which means that he didn't...