Weird little point. I like how the soldiers at the end of this chapter are all holding spears (or bow) with swords as side arms, and are wearing helmets. Little touches of historical realism.
Daddy issues definitely. Not a hate boner, but it could devolve to that if Stupid doesn't shape up soon.
I wonder if any of the demons knew that Dariel was actually human.
I would be surprised if the Knockers don't put regular headpats from Dariel in as part of their worker conditions.
I was not aware of the snipping issue.
This translation is certainly better.
I do agree with someone else's comment about if for practice, start at chapter 1, And compare works.
I things will work out for the best.