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@ElfBrony I think the macarons around the candel are supposed to be for the ghost

It's weird. There was the set up for an interesting plot with the one girl finding his brother's core, but that seams to have been dropped (for now). Right now the story feels like it's trying to be an improve the demon's quality of life/build friendly relations with humans story. But the...

Why even design a character like that if all it means is you have to put a distracting black square on them?

Hasn't eaten or slept for 3 days strait and feels fine? Man he just keeps setting flags huh.

This is a significant improvement compared to the last chapter. It's still a little rough but over all pretty good. Thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the translation. It's comprehensible enough to understand what's going on, but I'd recommend using a little more than 10% human mind to go over and smooth the machine translation.

Lol, imagine placing lower than your mom in a popularity contest.

@Monsieur_Pook Worse. Imagine you're playing cards with your boys and your head just fucking twists like a rubik's cube and explodes.

@ShionSinX Makes sense. I wasn't really considering anything other than attacking forward.

They keep saying a spear is bad for tight spaces, but isn't that one of the spears greatest strengths?

@ShionSinX I think the money thing is something to do with the master-apprentice relationship. Something like a graduation gift the master gives the apprentice when they finish their apprenticeship. MC just quit before the boss could give it to him/before he finished the apprenticeship.

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I didn't notice any issues with the translation, good job and thanks for the translation.

Uwa, I just noticed his neck and hands are segmented. Have they always been like that?

Wot cha' buyn'?

And so the rival becomes the love interest and the love interest becomes the rival

We made it boys, chapter 4.

@deathmailrock don't you remember his title? He's the 'Little Girl Killer' he wouldn't be interested in ladies.

@Talh I thought the reason they were keeping him in town wasn't because he was weak but because they know the second they give him a chance he's going to wander off to god knows where and they might never be able to find him again

We should of seen that the fight caused the dragon to wake up. With how it's framed it just feels like he's blaming himself for a coincidence. At worst he should feel bad for not being able to do something.