@koshwin
In the first panel of page 9, Ritz's sentence is confusing; it would make more sense if it's "Even if you can't drink it", but I don't know what's written in the original, so...
You switched between "liquer" and "liquor" throughout the chapter
P.S.
Thank you for the update
@koshwin
on page 7, last panel: you could use "this is a 'serve'" instead of "this is serve" for consistency.
on page 13, second panel: it should be "its limits".
Thank you for bringing us this wholesome couple and happy new year!
@koshwin
Assuming the request of looking for mistakes is valid for this chapter as well:
Page 2, bottom right panel
XENOPHIBIC should be XENOPHOBIC
Page 10, bottom right panel
You could change "who your family" with "whom your family", if it still fits grandpa's speech pattern