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Mediocre art, terrible pacing, everyone around the MC is an idiot. 3/10 Seriously the story beats are fucked. It's like someone cut out pages between the scenes or something so it's like the manga jump-cuts everywhere.

Well done author, I was just about to complain that nothing is happening, but you did something on the last page. It's not much but at least it's something. I know this is Josei but god do I not care about the melodrama between these idiots. Especially Ernon. Goddamn he's so pointless and mopey.

The art here is trash, especially in the latest chapter. So many off-model faces.

Why do isekai authors do this shit? It's not impressive that your MC kills thousands of monsters as part of his fetch quest, nobody cares that you grinded thousands of kills in an MMO my dude. Also, do you have any idea how much two thousand fucking wolves is? Wolves can come in packs of up to...

I honestly feel sorry for the artist who's drawing this. Like jesus christ it must be torment crowbarring such a dull story into something readable. @Montyblanc This explains a lot. The original author probably just pads it out to keep readers.

This writing needs to cut down on the false modesty crap it's actually really fucking grating. I know it's a Japan thing but it's getting in the way of writing at this point and makes the MC seem like's both bland and treating this like a video game. It's really fucking annoying. I know other...

There's a good story here but it needs like one more layer of adaptation to get there lol. @Korvalus Thanks, I vaguely remembered most of that but I still thought I must have forgot something. This is an isekai where the author could stand to put in a few character intro boxes.

I look forward to this story resolving Ermon's curse, like, 3 years from now. Especially at the rate we're going. Christ this is slow.

This is borderline parody. Seriously you cannot open with the death of a sister on literally the first page, it's like a joke. Plus the art is pretty naff and the story is paper-thin.

You know you're in trouble when your death cult villains are more interesting than your protagonist.

Can we please move on we had like 5 chapters where they do nothing but putz around and mope without communicating holy shit.

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This is feudalism, it just has catchy marketing phrases now.

I like this manhua but the author needs to chill with introducing new characters and plot elements. He literally forgot an important location for 100 chapters.

@macarroiz nice meme bro

You know I'm all for murdering slave traders but maybe your dumb ass shouldn't pay them first. And why are you suddenly focused on making that group yours? Like this seems really arbitrary, they barely know you and you already call dibs?

MC about to ruin everything in 3...2...1...

Rinko is doing all the heavy lifting here.

Does this really needed to develop so goddamn slowly? This stand-off is already three chapters long

"oh no I am competent but not masterful in every possible situation, truly this is the worst possible start" like come the fuck on.