I remember reading the Web Novel for this a while back, and I liked it somewhat, but I'm not entirely sure about the manga format.
While I don't remember enough about the Web Novel to make a proper comparison, I do remember the slow pacing and attitude it had towards
It just feels rushed to me...
@ak0ztik
Don't sell yourself short.
Humility in your work is fine, there's always a way to improve, but the baseline you're working with here is actually pretty good, way better than how I started, at least.
Even if it's "just MTL", as long as you look into sentence nuance and have a incredibly...
@Lament
That's why there's two collars. One for yourself, the other for your "partner", which isn't outwardly said to necessarily be the opposite sex, but is heavily implied.
If it's guy vs guy, the winner fucks the loser's partner.
Essentially, tournament of the cucks.
A well thought out and nuanced ending.
It's bitter-sweet, but we knew it had to happen, no?
The foreshadowing was there, and we should be thankful for the ride that brought us here.
@Nunally
I couldn't either, so I did a rough TL of chapter 6.2.
https://pastebin.com/CttbtQJ3
I didn't bother proofreading it, but it's probably about 95% right so fuck it.
Messed up some of the page numbers, bit I fixed it.
@kaezeribato
Idioms can go right over your head, even if you're proficient in a language.
Most of Fuistes' TLs aren't wrong, they're just poorly worded. In the cases they ARE wrong, then it's either a difficult sentence to translate, or an idiom that went over their head.
The group that I used...
My PC is atrocious and makes noise whenever it's processing a wall of text on the screen, so that page 22 AAAAAAAA panel actually made my PC make the same noise.
Spooked me a little bit.