I unblocked all my blocked groups earlier and noticed this translation is later than another group's. I'd much, much rather read this one.
Please keep doing this, this one is sooo much cleaner. 😌
I found some of the sentences... odd? Could use some proofreading here and there.
For example, page 9: "in the sense of apology" doesn't sound very natural. I think it would sound better if it was "as an apology"?
"that (rude person)", admittedly a bit hard to find the right word for it if you...