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Would definitely read a longer fanfic of this.

@Leikeze and you would be right.

For some reason I really want her bro to have his own story in an isekai world.

I thought this was a rip off of Death Stranding. Wait, is that a Jill Valentine rip off?

God, i know this is supposed to be some kind of epic revenge-reveal whatever, buy I couldn't take it seriously and has been laughing the whole time. Definitely in the 'so bad, it's good' category. Entertaining enough if you turn off your brain and don't take it seriously.

Oh, that's much better than I thought. I thought he was hentai kamen at first, lol.

@Fredthefishlord Definitely a stalker. Change Rei into a guy and I'm not sure if even half of the guys here would be shouting "cute" anymore. It's frankly, quite creepy. Still, it's better not to take stories like these too seriously.

Keep thinking that the mc's face looks really familiar. Took me awhile to realize that he looks just like the mc from the manhwa Sweet Home. Anyway, chill and adorable story, not much in term of plot and such though.

What's the point of having a one way translator if you gonna solve that particular problem in a few panels in the next chapter?...

Body proportion is a bit fecked up, and the dialogue is cringy at times. I get it, he's explaining things to the readers, but it could be done in a less obvious way. "I won't be able to gather any crystal point, OR CP, like this." I mean...who talks like that? Especially not to themselves. He...

@Ochredog If you like this then check out 1LDK+JK. It's kinda like this one. Fluffy hentai about a JK and a salary man.

@krutou That isn't really my point, but I guess I wasn't being clear enough. I'm having problem with the author using one liners to "develop" his character. He's "telling" and not "showing" the development. If it's going to be like that, an already powerful character will be better. I have no...

What's the point of having a weak mc if you're going to give him shitload of power ups early on? The struggle was shown for like...what? 1 chapter? Afterward it's all "I ate this, so I got that", "I tried this and that, and now I got this" one liners. Why not just establish that your character...

Boring...Overcome his 'classless' status with effort? Where is the effort? I certainly don't see it in this story.

You know it's great storytelling when you have to go read the story in another media to fill in plot holes.

All the NTR and rape shit aside...Why is everybody so fucking dumb? From the mc, to the heroine, to the antagonists. And what the mc is using isn't even considered "trap". He didn't even arm his "dungeon" during his down time, only pulling "traps" out of his ass when the enemy is right in front...

A little disappointing... If you can generate traps on the fly then that's not really called 'trap' anymore, just good ole offensive magic. If this is what he did with his game (the game generate traps as the players go, sometimes right under them), then yes, he's a shitty dev.

The conversations and the way the characters act and react is so jarring. It feels so out of place...

Remind me of the time I got FGO Merlin with my last 3 Quarts, good time.

Yeah... edgy MC, having magic despite there's no backstory to support that. When I read he's a 'magician' I hoped for something like the MC in "Tricks dedicated to witches". Oh well...