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This might be the best one and its the least horror related.

@aprianex yeah I know she isn't deaf but as a fast food employee myself that would have been my first assumption. So that's why it stood out to me.

"Why is she writing..." yes a fast food employee would never run into a deaf person or something or given a list of what they want...

When you do twists you're not supposed to do 3 every chapter. Something needs to be satisfying here and besides that bunny suit this has really sucked the joy out of this series. Ever since we got "Snape was a good guy" bs.

Something they might have mentioned before but does March remember heaven? Is that even where she went?

“When I get home, my sis always pretends to be dead”

@tamerlane “dead” as in he is a spirit. But he never died or experienced death so it’s fine.

This opening feels so familiar. I’m curious if the author is going to make the father likable the next time around or something. Still don’t get how a child clearly raised around the father could ever be mistaken as fake...

This is why you don’t go with your first draft.

The story I'm sure works better this way. But I really wished she was an actual murderer in self defense. The scene was really awesome though.

@Cloy552 oh okay been awhile. Whenever they don’t say their name I assume we don’t know them.

The whole chapter was setup for the pay off smoothly and then gets interrupted by the worst thing you can do. Interrupted cliff hanger with a new character.

Seems pretty overkill to basically cripple the dude secretly. Though he did intend to do the same back.

Why do you know things when you are a knight who has to fight these exact monsters???

To paraphrase Marty Mcfly She’s an asshole.

Sincerely: I became a Noble

The more and more I read manga the more and more I lose interest in teen romance manga. It’s been so long since I’ve seen something on the level of a Clannad that felt like there was a true goal in the story beyond “I hope I get an audience that I can drag with me until I’m told to stop.” What...

No one talks like that. She’s supposed to be mature not pompous.

@serapheid Glory Glory what a horrible way to die

@warpdrive do you also have a power bank that lasts 100 years or how do you plan on using wikipedia after a day.