10,000 Light-Year Binoculars

Quite an interesting concept. The art is cute too, buuut...
It should've ended after the 37th page. I mean the part after it doesn't make sense. When she looked through the binoculars she had looked at image of earth from 10000 years ago. The moment I realised that I thought it was a really clever idea I haven't seen used before. Sadly, for some reason the author decided that it wasn't enough and well now the ending just leaves a bad aftertaste.
 
Can someone explain the ending to me? How did the
paper plane go back in time?
 
I saw the "normal" ending from the beginning; it was a good use of a science concept to tell a sci-fi story. The final bit of the ending was kinda weird, it seems strange to me that relativity would go out the window given how rooted in relativity the story is.
 
Yeah, I don't know what happened
at the end there
, but it definitely impacted my enjoyment of the read. It's a shame.
 

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