12-sai kara no Himitsu - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Room Number 106

There's an art problem in this one (ending spoiler):
his expression at the end is so generically vague that you can't tell if he's scared, angry, slightly annoyed, turned on, passionately in love, just needs to go to the bathroom, or none of the above.
So I don't quite get what the punchline is supposed to be. And that's a problem.

And this is aside from the rather generic "babby's first controversial smutty mature manga" feel to it.
 

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