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jimmchanga Joined Mar 31, 2018 Messages 245 May 19, 2018 #3 Might wanna get the text proofread before putting it up. There is some text missing and some bubbles don't make sense grammatically.
Might wanna get the text proofread before putting it up. There is some text missing and some bubbles don't make sense grammatically.
K kaminomikan Joined Apr 4, 2018 Messages 3,765 May 19, 2018 #4 ppl die for poverty every second, so don't be so sad, that's how life works...
Hounder Contributor Joined Jan 19, 2018 Messages 2,543 May 19, 2018 #5 Didn't expect the social commentary on poverty in this chapter. Actually a good thing and helps develop the world and mc in a way you normally do not see in this genre. Well done.
Didn't expect the social commentary on poverty in this chapter. Actually a good thing and helps develop the world and mc in a way you normally do not see in this genre. Well done.