A Normally Dowdy Man Is in Essence the Mightiest War-God - Ch. 5

Ok so the art isnt the best, but what the heck is that face on page 7. I know the text says "pupupupu ahahahahha" but the face doesn't match that at all.
 
Not bad tits drawings but shit faces and weird dialogue it’s honesty a bit annoying
 
Somehow the time when she was talking about demons getting involved and thinking about he was camping with other girls became confusing. Like which topic should we prioritize there? You're talking about something very important don't make it less important by creating a romcom.
 
@Gladiator02 I think they’re trying to convey the idea that, no matter how “important” the information is, she’s only doing this because of him. She couldn’t care less about the weird stuff going on, she just wants to be around Bal.

But is it written awkwardly? Yeah, it is.
 
The way the manga is going through the plot is not good and sometimes confusing. Well, at least this isn't written as bad as dhm.
 
Ok wtf does she mean by "living in the same time"?
Is she a Time traveler or what?
 
So, they had sex? The water bucket in page 4 seems to subtlety imply that.

Also, I only half understand of what they were saying in this chapter. I remember translation wasn't this bad before. What happened here?
 

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