A Very Delightful Tale of Revenge - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - "First Steps"

[MangaDex]

 

[Ground2]

I want the Madam to step on me

 

[NateDerp42]

Oooh I like

 

[Piyush123]

Too bad, this thing is going for harem route.

 

[fullfull]

Interesting

 

[thomasjenkins]

my eyes are bleeding. the original one punch man has better art.

 

[ramzy]

Sound promising, Bookmarked!

 

[Mango]

charming in s strange way lol

 

[razarulz]

why the art is like from year 2000

 

[Logan81271]

Looks fun. Can't wait for more.

 

[Zero00_X]

art wise badish plotwise ok

 

[Guytsu]

I like the art, personally. It has it's own distinct style and charm. Though I've also always been a sucker for large breasts, so that might have something to do with it, too.

 

[RanmaChaos]

A nice start, I look forward to more.

 

[Brize]

User created? Never seen this tag. So it's original work and not translation?

In any case, I like the art, it's not a carbon copy of the usual Asian look that is around, it gives a more western vibe. Less detailed in some ways, but adding in others. Some poses do look odd and unrealistic, but if I'm right, it's decent for fist time debut in my eyes.

 

[kdtruebone]

@Brize Thank you for the comment. Yes. it's my original manga/comic. I've done one super short comic like 2 years ago, but this is my first long-form story. I've got ideas for around 100 chapters, so my art skills will hopefully keep on improving as I go.

 

[Melvin4321]

i read this chapter 2 times whens the next coming out

 

[deterrance]

@kdtruebone WE NEED MOOOREEE!!!!! I like it so much! I hope u'll continue