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pyonthehead Joined Apr 27, 2019 Messages 319 May 22, 2020 #2 v nice story, the characters are all v interesting as well, i really enjoyed reading it
DayLo Joined May 30, 2020 Messages 713 Jul 17, 2020 #4 I enjoyed this except for the resolution of the ‘crisis’ for the MC. That felt too rushed and didn’t seem believable.
I enjoyed this except for the resolution of the ‘crisis’ for the MC. That felt too rushed and didn’t seem believable.