Am I Your Daughter? - Ch. 3

Well, I do find this intriguing, but if you weren't uploading this fast, I wouldn't have bothered. Man this is slooooow.
 
Ohh... i thought the boy was his son but... apparently he's someone on higher standing? So prob a prince?
 
The convo between the two blondes was hilarious & this is super sweet & I love it so much already.
Thank you so much for translating! ❤️
 
so does the duke and the most likely some form of royalty kid just happen to share very similar design or is it the goold ole european incest hasburg jaw?
 
She has the same eyes as the Duke!

And the head bump is just so damn cute!
 
the mystery of her birth is too enticing. is she like some sort of a clone? magic experiment? that knight and kid duo are blonde like her. so. they're obv important and her soon-to-be allies. and most likely related ro the reason of her birth. arghh,i can't get over how those people are holding swords. that's?? not how one holds them??????? i know jacksht about swoldhandling but i'm pretty sure those stances are unstable and leaves too wide of an opening. and that blonde knight, when he kicks nameless guard a, he's holding the sword in a weird reverse grip thingy? that i'm pretty sure is not how you hold swords of that style??? was it so hard for the artist to find some references? or do people really use swords like that?
 
I really hope this gets better because right now it's kind of abysmal. The villain is hamfisted and catoonishly evil, the MC acts waaaay too young for someone mentally 19 (she talks like a baby and cries constantly. just say she gets premonitions and visions instead of memories) and the character design... why are all the bad guys brown hair/brown eyes and the protagonists are blond/blue eyed...? Is anyone else seeing this?

It's generic at best. right now? 4/10, easy. 4.5 max.
 
If you look closely...
The author is bad at drawing fight scenes and the sword is too long
 

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