Ame to Kimi to - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Neighbors

yeah. also the ch2 shocked face is a huge difference. The brush strokes give it impact that the clean lines dont
 
Legal ages come and go, but Shiba rage is Unchanging and Eternal.

Pre-Serialization
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Serialization
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The highschool girl drank from the fountain of youth. But unfortunately for poor (racoon) dog, his greatest enemy is still around.
 
Amusingly (amazingly?) the twitter version was better. But serialized is better for creator, so I guess editor will get their way. And more comics is still better than no comics, I guess.
 
Sorry to be that guy, I really love this manga and want it to be great, but on page 3, panel 3, you would use the word "lend" instead of "borrow." Or if you want to change the sentence structure, you could say "I got an extra harness that you can borrow so we can go together on a walk". It's actually a super common mistake by even native English speakers.
 
>instantly associating a little girl with degeneration
lol who are the denegerates again?
 
Oh, the shattered hopes and dreams 😂

Worst part is, in the last panel the dog is actually bowing, so it wants to play. The aggressive face at the beginning feels weird.
 

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