Anata To Watashi Wo Tsunagu Mono - Oneshot

nice story.
if the red line of fate is bound by a person, bias can obscure their judgement. Or, a mechanical error, and they tie the string wrong.
if the red line of fate is bound by the world itself, an "inanimate object" shouldn't be making these calls anyways.
In other words, the red line means nothing.
rome was not built in a day, love is not found overnight.
 
I mean if some case I will have the vision of fate red strings thing like her and the teacher, and I finally meet that person...


WILL TOTES STRAIGHT UP GRAB MY SCISSORS AND CUT OFF THAT ANNOYING STRING
 
I feel like something is missing but idk

Right? Her feelings and the build up seem to make sense. But the MC’s spent most of the chapter thinking about her “fated person” that it left me unsatisfied that we didn’t see much of her feelings for the true girl. Maybe that’s it?
 
@Yurial
Her feelings for the other girl are on display in the whole short, and the sensei basically spells it out for her at the end when they finally talk one on one.

For all her obsessing over her fated person she had gone and essentially been married to someone she loves and just hadn't realized.
 
For something like this to exist.. I really want more yuri stories to be successful..

Thank you so much for the chapter! <3<3
 

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