You're doing awesome for a one-man team, Xvyelle! Thanks for the chapter!
The dad IS going too far. You could tone it down a bit, y'know? It makes our [redacted name MC] spiral into more negativity. It's actually kinda sad how the only person she is getting attached to right now is a character that she created though it's understandable. I do hope he will be able to converse with her more and perhaps even help her later on.