Billionaire in Love - Ch. 3

execution:

pros:
toast in mouth
falling posture that (probably) shows panties
pointing gesture when she sees MC in classroom

cons:
no pulling down your skirt, saying 'did you see? (my panties)' ,
not saying 'pervert' / slapping MC
saying 'ill manner gentleman' is too posh - 'ah, it's you' would be better,

I rate it 7/10.

the plan is better than the execution, but personally I would have preferred you used the mysterious transfer student in the middle of the year, and spread rumors to have people guess whether new transfer is a boy or girl.
 

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