Haru to Midori - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

Seem promising, can't wait to see how it play and if the father will butt in.
 
good premise
i hope this will be good now
but look at this chapter this will be an average story but thats okay
 
That was really nice even as one shot, but I'm so happy is not just a one shot! I'ts gonna be awkward and funny I guess with drama too, I'm all for it!
 
We got a blonde girl and a tall dark-haired girl. Three guesses at the one who "isn't good with people".
Come on... At least try to be creative. I'm not wasting my time on another NTR, Citrus or the like.
 
@Pachka84 How this set-up is nearly similar to the likes of Citrus or NTR to begin with ? If anything the behavior are the opposité of the ones you talk about and it's not about two high school girl but between an adult and a middle schooler. It's more like Hoshikawa Ginza District 4 than anything.
 
Interesting setup, hope it doesn't go all in on depressing back stories later.

Also @Pachka84 I was waiting for this exact comment from you and you didn't disappoint. I'm actually convinced you're a troll at this point since you're so predictable with it and the fact that you refered to Nettaigyo wa Yuki ni Kogareru as a dumpster fire when it seems pretty competently written, so you keep doing you bud.

@Karolyn I'm right there with ya, I've got a feeling this is going to get heavy
 
Also it remind me of Kusanagi-sensei is Being Tested minus the sensei/student set up and minus the comedy.
 
Looks really nice and i would love to read more. So both midori and tsugumi had a hard life after they drifted apart after middle school and i wonder how haruko knows midori's name (Pretty sure tsugumi told her daughter a lot about midori), i can feel the emotions coming when some flashbacks happen
 
I just surprise. They keep one number for so long. Like 14 years ? that crazy. 5 years and i lost like 5 numbers. We use sim and lost it countless of time. Did they use something else ?
 
Well, now I'm sad. Great. In other words, I now literally have to read this whole thing through as it releases.
 
"Don't you feel sad for your mother?"
Lol, I was hit by that once.
It piss me off just by thinking about it.
 
@ngkn92 same, people asked when my mom died why im not crying,there's a reason, i just dont like talking about it
 

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