Hitokui Dungeon e Youkoso! THE COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - The meeting with Astarte

[MangaDex]

 

[Vigo_to_Vigo]

So, all that crap and exposition from the last chapter and he didn't actually save Dahlia, he just kept Dahlia the body alive while Dahlia the character died anyway. So unsatisfying, I'm jumping off this train. Peace

 

[GodGinrai]

Does QC include proofreading? Because this chapter doesn't feel like it was proofread.

 

[GurenNoOu]

@Vigo_to_Vigo Astarte told the MC that Dahlia can recover if he gives her more magic power, so no, the character of Dahlia isn't dead.

 

[monkey123]

A powerful magician has come to the mining village!?

More like "A powerful magician has come to the mining village to get laid!?" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

 

[1122334455]

NNN is dying in front of me.

 

[Drifter]

The cover spoils how both Dahlia and the magician girl end up.

 

[Orekisan69]

Pleaaaaaaaase at least get a proofreader

 

[Hollow7F]

@Drifter wait, the magician girls in on the left, astarte is in the middle, are u saying the one on the right is dahlia?

 

[Drifter]

@Hollow7F. Ah, my mistake there. That's what happens when I stay home sick reading too much manga. Faces tend to blend together. Looks like it will be a kemo girl instead. At least, the chapter leaves up with hope for Dahlia.

 

[KaiserZ]

We need proofreader!! , please send a message

 

[Xunder]

@KaiserZ My group and Ayakashi are doing this series together as a joint, why did you pick it up when there's active groups working on it?

Edit: WE DROPPED IT

 

[rockoford]

L- LEWD

 

[conscript117]

@KaiserZ
woooooow, taking another scan-group working series, that's disgusting man......
It took all of my courage to not read this....or not...I just went to the wn.

 

[gaigous]

I'm just so happy there's finally an adaptation with a legit Succubus and a Demon MC that acts like a Demon.

 

[kaminomikan]

so the girl didn't survive?

 

[Homelander]

@kaminomikan kinda. i think she needs mc's cum/magic, to make her "her" again. till that happens, she's like an emotionless doll. if im wrong do correct me.

 

[Vigo_to_Vigo]

@GurenNoOu That's not at all how that scene reads to me. Seems more like she's telling him that the Golem will just be more active eventually.

Cause from her perspective he's just staring at her, moving her limbs around. Unless Astarte can read minds.

 

[LoneWizzy]

Dunno, unless tl completely fucked up it seems like she will get her personality back eventually @Vigo_to_Vigo

 

[Liquidxlax]

no more?