Hyouryuu Net Cafe - Vol. 7 Ch. 63 - Time to Become an Adult

[Lopoly]

This was a pretty gripping story through and through. I admit that it left me feeling angry, but I think it served its purpose to evoke some emotion out of the reader.
Might be because of bias, I kind of relate to this story, but it was good.
Also, this gave me another good bullet point for the list of reasons of why I should become huge; not have my ass kicked in another dimension.

 

[Lopoly]

ALSO, FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
IM SO SADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
ALL THE FUCKING STRUGGLIN(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
AND FOR WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
NEVER LETTING MYSELF BECOME A KOICHI

 

[Chair_6010]

What a beautiful story about letting go and moving on

 

[bunaboo]

I would feel more content with this story if he had stayed in the parallel world with toono rather than going back to reality. I wouldnt say this alternative was worse, but the ending could've been executed much better if toono turned out to be real. The idea that the story was about the mc moving on and finally getting a grasp on things was a great idea but it felt too rushed, if the author had just thrown in a couple transitional chapters that made things flow together smoother the ending wouldve been much more satisfying rather than having this feeling of emptiness in my stomache. My honest rating is about 6/10 it had a really good plot that seemed to be heading in a good direction, and it was for awhile, but the ending just has too many loose ends and ended too abruptly to leave me satisfied.