I Came to Another World as a Jack of All Trades and a Master of None to Journey While Relying on Quickness - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[Gauvain]

@Lorexen
It is important to respect the original numbering, this avoids confusion (for you as well as for us)
Moreover it is written in the rules, "Make sure the numbers are correct."
For the other sites it does not matter, they did not ask you and it will not prevent them from sleeping and earn money off your back.

 

[sparrow34]

is no one going question the eye mask?

like, at all?

 

[DarkZage]

@HiraOmnibus He also needs to work on his backgrounds so he can flesh out the world. In chapter two, When Daniela was about to fight the group of thugs, I didn't notice they were outside of town until the MC said to run back to the town. I thought she went back to the same spot that she was at before, where she was eating with the MC. The pace is too fast as well. These things i mentioned might just be me though.

 

[coldb7]

'Why would SHE want to party with me" doesn't he mean "Why would YOU want to party with me" is he talking to her or not?

 

[coldb7]

this guys beta-ness is starting annoy me.

 

[QuaggWasTaken]

Thought I should mention this, even if the chapter is 3 months old. Groups of wolves are known as "packs" not "pacts". Pacts are agreements or contracts between people.

 

[UncleRad]

Eat, Fight & Flirt. The 3 Basics of life.

Thanks for your Jack of All Trades efforts @lorexen !

 

[Cyromantik]

It seems like the reason she wears the mask is related to her "fresh green eyes" ability. I'm guessing it's like how pirates would wear an eye patch over one eye topside, then switch eyes below decks. Maybe exposing her eyes in the city too much ruins her spirit vision.

I guess the mangaka is a little "green" themselves, but I wonder what was up with the way she's transporting her bow in a sports case? Additionally she's stabbing that wolf with a longsword but the grip is like it's a tanto, but the hilt is pretty long so her wrists are super awkward. I think the artist could benefit from watching a few HEMA videos to get and idea how to hold Western style melee weapons.

Still, the artist has more guts doing this kinda thing than I do.