Ichizu Bitch-Chan (Web) - Ch. 28 - A Story of Patience Between a Flirty Kouhai and a Senpai (Part 2) - Worries

@Richman
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Something about that resolution feels weird to me. Like it was too light or something?
 
@piay123 Yea, it feels like the author wanted to create a tense situation/drama but at the same time he couldn't commit to it while maintaining the manga's lighthearted atmosphere, so the resolution was rushed to return the story to its status quo.
 
Kinda bugs me when we go from "beating you kid with a picture frame" to "everyone's happy". Intense drama whiplashing into SoL is kinda immersion breaking and unrealistic, especially when it goes against the general tone of a series in the first place.
 
@Yautja Yeah, this is especially bad; there's blood on the goddamn picture frame but in the same chapter she's taking advice on how to parent her son?
 
To the new translator, good luck!

But man, this manga used to be really good until the author made MC's mom one hell of a bitch
 

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