I'll Do That Marriage - Ch. 13

wait what ? She was alone with mr creep then all of a sudden mr-idiot-who-blames-the-ML-for-shit-he-had-no-hand-in appears out of nowhere and smoothly integrated himself into the scene...why is the creep apologizing to him and barking ? Has the MV even met him before ?
WTF is happening ???
 
The flow for this series seems to be rushed and confusing? Thanks for the update!
 
Is this that inevitable point where an amateur writer crumbles under the pressure and their creation descends into incoherent madness?
 
I just have no idea what is happening. He wants to kill her and breaks into her room, just to let her leave and start talking down to his subordinate?
 
Yeah... no idea what anyone's doing at this point... just people trying to be edgy and failing at it.
 

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