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Sullieman Group Leader Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 170 Feb 25, 2019 #2 If you see anything wrong with this release, please let me know.
Talismaster Joined May 25, 2018 Messages 1,298 Feb 25, 2019 #3 @Sullieman I have found something terribly wrong. The loli elf’s attire is absolutely unacceptable.
Otong777 Joined Jun 19, 2018 Messages 361 Feb 25, 2019 #4 Being a tsundere is not gonna make him understand, Erin and thanks for the update
T TjapDjemboet Group Leader Joined Jan 23, 2018 Messages 286 Feb 25, 2019 #5 ravioli - ravioli, mc dontwant lewd lolioli i mean really? does japanese see half naked loli wandering around as usual things? smh
ravioli - ravioli, mc dontwant lewd lolioli i mean really? does japanese see half naked loli wandering around as usual things? smh
HaikenEdge Joined Jun 12, 2018 Messages 501 Feb 25, 2019 #6 Somebody's about to get their ass kicked.
A alonerone Joined Jan 28, 2019 Messages 1,113 Feb 25, 2019 #8 He still not giving her a skirt or pants?????
Drifter Joined Jan 22, 2018 Messages 2,062 Feb 25, 2019 #10 And still none of the characters have noticed that someone took the middle part of the elf's shorts.
xretardedgecko Joined Dec 10, 2018 Messages 49 Feb 25, 2019 #11 can someone give me a link of this novel?
Solaz Joined Sep 26, 2018 Messages 628 Feb 25, 2019 #12 Characters wearing believable attire is an important part of making a good story. Doesn't seem like there is going to be a good reason for the kid to be running around in underwear
Characters wearing believable attire is an important part of making a good story. Doesn't seem like there is going to be a good reason for the kid to be running around in underwear
Crash21 Joined May 27, 2018 Messages 547 Feb 25, 2019 #15 mc is such a dumbo, I hope his character getting softer with the girls as he begin to understand more about being sympathy and tolerance.
mc is such a dumbo, I hope his character getting softer with the girls as he begin to understand more about being sympathy and tolerance.
T Tenri Joined Jan 27, 2018 Messages 222 Feb 25, 2019 #16 There ought to be a limit to being dense and this guy passed it a long time ago.
SoloSera Joined Jul 9, 2018 Messages 1,169 Feb 25, 2019 #19 I thought Mc acted kind of adorable this chapter. Like a little kid. Having a little kid run an orphanage seems weird, though.
I thought Mc acted kind of adorable this chapter. Like a little kid. Having a little kid run an orphanage seems weird, though.