Isekai Tensei no Boukensha - Vol. 2 Ch. 6 - story.6

First thing first, thanks for the translation
Second, it is just me or the proofreader rushed the chapter?
 
Thanks for the chapter.

Btw. some suggestions:

Page 10: "I think it is safe to delete it." --> "I think it is better to kill him."
Page 14: "What's more, it's a frontier count?" --> "Besides that is it someone from / belonging to the frontier count?"
Page 14: "Haha, if so, would you fire the frontier count?" --> "haha, if so would you attack the frontier count?"
Page 19: Please also translate the status window there. Thanks.
Page 21: "A group of orcs? ...and it's not just an orc." --> "A group of orcs? ...and it's not just normal orcs."
(The term "a group of orcs" already says that it is not just 1 orc. So the 2nd half is most likely meant to state that they are special orcs - as it will be explained when he sees the orc king.)
page 21: "Are they being attacked by some humans?" --> "Are they attacking some humans?"
(It should be obvious that the orcs attacked the human carriage and not the other way around.)
page 22: "You are too controlled by the orcs!" - No idea what this is supposed to say here but I am quite sure that this text is wrong.
 
What is a king doing out there with like little to no guards

Thanksfor the update ❤️
 
You know, like many other isekai series, this will be good at the start until
the author decides to kill his family and destroy his village so that he could turn this into harem trash just like "Barrier master isekai"
 
Richardo is Tenmas dad. Since he humiliated them earlier.
I am honestly more curious of who Richelle is in that context 😅
 
Same
But also
😒 Why did I even start reading this? It's full of tropes and overused plot devices...
 
Hmmmmmmmmm? For some reason I had high rating set for this but now can't even remember wtf is this or wtf is happening and why now...
 

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