10.5/10. Original score 9.5/10 but final comments added one extra point for the author being hungry.
The original 9.5/10 score came from how sweet this story and the events taking place here is. The only issue is that some parts just move unnaturally quick, and I would've been fine having a small wall of text to explain and to even the pace out. Otherwise, nice art, and I'll be looking forward to Hiroyoshi Koutake's work.