Kneel Before Me - Ch. 1

At least she has acquaintances in this one (besides having a loyal maid) and isn't a social outcast.
 
my man, the translation is hard to read. i think some of point of view is wrong. like when the mc thinking of laura being happy about the failed engagement the subject said you. im not a native english speaker but this just hard to digest. i hope you will like redo this and edits the use of sentence or so. even i cant understand almost all annemarie gibberish. is she using third person way of talk or what? im so confused
 
Thanks for the translating, but Annemary's ears is so weird sometimes! 🤨
 

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