Kokenoshima - Vol. 0 - Oneshot
- Thread starter MangaDex
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Christ, the art alone is so detailed and orgasmic, but man, the panels aren't working enough to fit all the details right there, not to mention, the story was a mess. Not saying it wasn't good, it was exceptional, but the execution has so much more to improve imo. A lot of backstory/explanation should have also gone into this to make it a 9/10 work, looking forward to more of this guy's works.
ps: And just my opinion, the artist/author could consider bringing down the use of black to a lesser extent, or give different shades of it, it's really hard to get the details otherwise.
ps: And just my opinion, the artist/author could consider bringing down the use of black to a lesser extent, or give different shades of it, it's really hard to get the details otherwise.
