Late Winter - Ch. 4 - Beware of Fire
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DrDuckling
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Plots are all over the places. Went from "cool! talking cat!" to "Damn... human sucks" becomes "Snowman can generate a cool looking axe out of.. snow?"
Yeah, The premise/start looked ok. Thought it was cool maybe a female MC was surviving on her own (i. but I just personally feel I am loosing interest. :/ cant really put a finger on it. Talking cat out of nowhere kinda doesnt help. Maybe cause its lacking world building to start his story :/. maybe its lame she has to be rescued already and we only just started...
