Ningyo Ouji

The first two are great imo - don't know what the third was trying to accomplish, really. It went from an atypical girl into out of nowhere, "THIS HAPPENS! SHE DONE THE THING!" with absolutely no build up aside from a little reference from earlier. And then it ends like lol?
 
I really love the stories. There is some sort of realization in life that came to me while reading the first story. The third story is really interesting
 

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