Noble Witches - 506th Joint Fighter Wing - Vol. 3 Ch. 12 - DeBlanc

Page 6: Needs to be "were all of you eavesdropping" instead of "we're."
Page 7: Not as glaring, but probably should be "then the Flight Lieutenant is already". Or leave out the "the" and add the name Deblanc.
 

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