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Yarramie Joined Mar 26, 2018 Messages 334 Mar 8, 2019 #2 story seems all over the place.... maybe pages are missing or they are in the wrong order, but it definitely keeps cutting to different scenarios too often and the next chapter doesn't flow with the first...
story seems all over the place.... maybe pages are missing or they are in the wrong order, but it definitely keeps cutting to different scenarios too often and the next chapter doesn't flow with the first...
