Record of Erotic Warrior - Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[HiroTheHero]

Da fak is tis bs?

 

[Petrapavlosk]

Awawaws

 

[greatninja3]

What a bitch time to fk her

 

[Legandbond]

*brain.exe has had an error*

 

[welcome2atlantis]

MC is a guy, with fellatio skill.
I shall tread forward, carefully.

 

[Js1a231]

So, she's the goddess right?

 

[Mfrost]

Honestly, if there's a pretty girl who can knock out the MC or any guy, I'm favoriting it and rating it at least an 8. Please continue with this

 

[chusetto]

Record of the Fuck Warrior

 

[mizorin]

what a absolute load of crap .
.
.
.
see u all turds next chapter

 

[7senpai]

all the people in the room and she choose to punch the MC -_-

 

[XNovalX]

I thought we were past cliches, I thought this wouldn't indulge in retarded characters that are abusive for no reason. Way to ruin the first fucking chapter, autistic ass author.

 

[Add1152000]

She’s the goddess that got pulled along due to him touching her I’m guessing.

 

[Tbird90677]

This should be fun

 

[Hikigaya_Hachiman]

Seems a good start

 

[Denker-Bosu]

As n advice, check whenerver you use words in past tense in a sentence with "did"
Its "did you just say x?" not "did you just said x?"
The did makes sai'd' irrelevant.

 

[Cinna2Spicy]

Did the Mc really almost made a goddess give him a blow?

 

[KingDM23]

Guess he couldn't activate his skill in time

 

[Sola]

"Unique skill: Clicking the mouse rapidly with three fingers. To achieve this skill, I had to keep practicing over and over again through numerous games."

I guess this MC never heard of macro mice. They're not even that much more expensive than a standard mouse without macro capabilities.


This chapter really needed better proofreading. There were mistakes on nearly every page. "Let get right into it!" That's just one of many similar errors. Even worse is, "Did he just said... hero?"

Some pages even have errors in every panel, such as page six: https://images2.imgbox.com/5c/ac/sJ1SsM9H_o.png

 

[johnpoop2529]

I hate tsunderes! Why are they so common?