Sato Zakuri Tanpenshuu - Shoujo, Shoujo, Shoujo na no. - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - On the Bed

[MangaDex]

 

[simplicity]

While the idea for this was sound, I don't feel it was carried out well. I had no idea what the guy was feeling the entire time until the last few pages, and even then I felt it was flimsy. You could tell this was one of the author's older works though.