I understand, better than most, that language A>language B>language C can only produce so much quality, but...ugh...
Also, premise itself. Okay, so the lightning chickS, plural, are Sekirei too? But they work together? And they targeted an unwinged Sekirei, which makes sense: eliminate competition when they're weak. But when she gets winged, they back off, even 2-on-1. Cause "they're not supposed to fight winged ones"? What? And who/where's their Ashikabi(s)?
Looks to me like they're a different faction, kinda sorta like "monitors" of the game? Same with the dude that protected Musubi.
Idk, I'm already lost. And NOT cause "information that will be given later, right now we're building mystery". Rather, cause poor translation, story telling and world building.
Sigh...