Senpai ga Boku wo Torinikiteru - Vol. 2 Ch. 20 - Test and rehearsal

The same group is doing these translations but this chapter wildly differs in quality from the previous ones. What's up?
 
Not gonna lie, this translation is super rough.

Pg1: first bubble, spanish style question mark.
 
This was pretty funny lol. I say she is probably going to save the 4 metre result as that could come in useful later lol.

Thanks for translating the chapter.
 
hmm the maid is a trap?? well i mean the maid does have a "boyish" face but i could be wrong
 
Pronouns sort of all over the place, and a few other bungles, but still mostly intelligible. Thanks for the TL!
 
Need a better proofreader for this, this chapter felt like a mess. Grammar is wrong on so many pages, even as early as page 1. Page 5: his>her head.

Really, fire the proofreader, he sucks at his job.
 
I think you got the pronouns confused a few times.

Also, jesus christ poor bodyguards
 
Suggestions:

Her hands on her breast doesn't make sense either -> His hands on her breasts doesn't come naturally either

You had to put this idea in his head -> You had to put this idea in her head
 

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