Senryuu Shoujo - Vol. 5 Ch. 70.5 - Nanako and Eiji

[MangaDex]

 

[monka188]

This chapter took a while.

 

[havelmom]

OTP

 

[Mabbo]

I don't know why she thinks being chased by yakuza is better than moving away...

 

[Vergift]

This is a beautiful side story.

 

[lagers00]

Any side story of this manga is always welcome

 

[Bogdan6222]

Wiener

 

[Bufuman]

Wait wait wait go back to that side story, I always need more Prez

 

[Seito]

yet another one,
Prez interesting stories,
only teased to us.

did this work...(?)

 

[ABCsOfLife]

Well I can assume this going to be included in it's upcoming anime, if not.. well...

 

[JigokuShounen]

This is beautiful.

 

[moozooh]

@monka188
Is it just myself,
Or verses near the end had
Wrong syllable counts?

At some moments there
The five-seven-fives just blurred
Into sneaky sixs!

(God, I fucking hate
Diphthongs in English language —
So damn annoying!)

Oh, and by the way,
What is the syllable count
In "senryuu"? Three?

(You know, doing this
Is actually challenging,
But also quite fun!)

 

[Chireall]

@moozooh
Here is what I thought;
around that time in their life
both are still newbie.

Thus, as a result,
they are still learning to make
a proper structure.

Or, for some reason,
The translator made mistakes.
Understandable.

It has been a while
since I wrote like this for fun,
This is kinda nice.

I should stop right here,
before I got distracted.
Refrigerator.

Also, I would think
"Senryuu" are two syllables.
Still, I am not sure.

 

[BlueSkies]

Gotta love the father's overblown reactions. I don't think I'll ever get tired of them.

 

[shinshi]

It's a good manga
But too sweet for a story
I'm diabetes now!!!

 

[nobaka]

good luck scorpionprez!

 

[HighStream]

I thought she'd confess
Then I saw it's omake
but this is fine, too

 

[BasilD]

This had to come soon
Their chapter zero's too cute
That I punched a wall

 

[qaaj]

In spring love blossoms
Words exchanged, feelings expressed
Yakuza gave chase

 

[Shento]

As for how many
syllables senryuu word has
i think maybe four

せ　ん　りゅ　う in japanese
sen - ryuu in english